First Impression Feedback Thread (Ch 1-3) (Patreon)

I wanted a place where you all could give some immediate feedback on the first few chapters of the book. This way I can hear what your opening impressions are, and nobody spoils anything ahead of where they are in the story.

Feel free to bring up anything that really stood out to you, whether it be positive or negative. 

Is there any formatting or wording that was particularly good, or hard to read? Also, let me know what characters you liked, or can't stand if any. And of course, tell me what you think of Nick and Selena, both individually and as a duo.