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Nobody saw this coming!  (nobody saw this cumming?)  It’s JOYCE(?!) and DOROTHY in “FRIEND OF DOROTHY (THE BIGGEST),” the newest Dumbing of Age Pornographique featured over on SLIPSHINE!   It’s 19 all-new, full-page comic pages of definitely Not Safe For Work stuff.  It hankies AND it pankies.  It knows all the sexifying ways without having to Google anything first!

So go grab a subscription and your wife, I mean girlfriend.  I definitely meant to say girlfriend.

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Taigan

I got my subscription this morning but the website isn’t letting me log on. Waiting to hear back from the support team.

Zesstra

If it weren't for having to go through CCBill I would have got on this so fast. As is, my anxiety about that sort of thing has kept me away.

Verteiron

Half the Internet was down this morning so it may not be your account.

Morgan Byrd

Gonna be honest I thought you were going to do a rug pull. Maybe Steve eating cereal would come crashing through the wall like the Kool-aid man.

Taigan

Is the internet *still* down because it’s still not working for me.

Harold

Our fellow Patreon commenter doinks posted a comment on Tumblr, which Willis has now immortalized as a joke-y alternate title for the Slipshine: "She Rich on My Mullins Till I Go Out Like Elijah"

Ty34er

It was good, but it was weird seeing Joyce naked with another girl instead of a guy

The other Alan

It was doing that to me until I read the fine print. Clear your cookies and it ought to let you in.

KM

Same, European time 20:00, the AWS DNS is resolved, not sure why it's not working.

Hambolove16

What a great time to be broke 🥲

Taigan

Finally got my login working. …the charts and graphs played a smaller part than I imagined. 😜

Amós Batista

The long play game. Bravo, Willis!

William Lewis

I know :( I have to wait till Friday.

Harold

Sometimes it seems like the Patreon itself needs a Slipshine...

ValdVin

Do those freckles go all the way down? Tune in and find out!

EnterTheHero

Straight up hankying on that panky

Chason

I'm confused, I logged into Slipshine at members.orgymania.net and I only see the old DoA chapters. Have I been paying the wrong Slipshine or something?

Chason

So I finally got access after contacting CCBill support, and I really enjoyed this but I will be cancelling Slipshine after my experience with CCBill, and to a similar extent Slipshine. I hope for future pornographiques you offer them some other way, as I don't think either company can be trusted.

Taigan

Finally figure out what the issue was. Unlike any other website I’ve ever used, Slipshine seems to care about capitalization in the email field. 🤷‍♀️

Maude Reads Things

Willis, if you keep breaking Slipshine they're eventually gonna decide the costs in getting the server back up is bigger than what they make and stop hiring you. :P

Maude Reads Things

Unfortunately, these pieces were commissioned by Slipshine and so he can't offer them elsewhere is my understanding.

Minzoku Bokumetsu

yeah, I just get a disposable card and subscribe for one month every blue moon when the ONE new thing I want to see is up, it's too much of a hassle dealing with them to subscribe indefinitely (also, better for budgeting reasons)

5099 5618 v2.0

@BBCC Eventually like how if you keep adding smaller and smaller fractions endlessly you still eventually get to infinity?

ArdieBea

So, reading now for appreciation... Pg 1. A risky choice giving Becky a voice in this moment, but all the ironies. And is this flashback a way of establishing 'The first moment I saw you.' as here rather than being at the floor meeting with Ruth or next day in Leslie's classroom? Dorothy's twitchy upper lip communicates so much anticipation, and our Domme Joyce surrenders to her princess's ministrations with grace as pants are removed. Pg 2. Paying attention to the placement of Dorothy's thumbs illuminates the action in the first strip as Dorothy pulls Joyce's legs wide. Joyce's loving "Dor...Dorothy...DOROTHY!" trailing down the rest of the page highlights that for Joyce, this is more about the person she's with than what that person's doing. At the same time, the thin dark line of arousal in her undies becomes a broad patch as Dorothy provides positive reinforcement to some gorgeous thighs. Pg 3. Eight narrow dialogue panels, focused on that patch, flicking from face to face, culminating in Dorothy beginning a clean-up operation by removing obstacles with her teeth. The page references some other obstacles they had to overcome to get here. Pg 4. Full page image with Joyce still trying to say her lover's name through increasing incoherence. The slanting light convincingly catches the edge of her undies, the tip of her clit, Dorothy's fingertips, and the underside of Joyce's ribs and one breast as it escapes her bra. Pg 5 & 6 Joyce is on her knees - and on her girlfriend's face. Her shouted desire interrupts the action; Dorothy has to question and to clarify. But... they 'get each other' in every sense of the phrase. Pg 7 Joyce follows through on her promise to undress Dorothy, and as she does, she reflects on her childhood expectations about marriage to take into consideration her new realities. A single central image provides the focus, with word balloons down one side and close-up frames down the other and along the bottom carrying the dialogue through a series of tender moments. Pg 8. Dorothy reciprocates as Joyce strips off, baring herself, also, by recalling different meanings and realities that Joyce has made real in her life. The dialogue of these two pages has the cadence of wedding vows. Pg 9 Confirmed as Joyce states explicitly that all of her is Dorothy's always. And then.... Well, that's enough for now. The rest is delightful fun and very sweet and realistic and dorky and sexy. Pg 10, Dorothy shouts "I need you more than anything!" (though she may have just been talking about fingers, tbh) but then on Pg 17, Joyce demands "Give me all of you!", and on the next page, as she comes ever closer to cresting that wave building within, Dorothy (against a flash-back of that fateful hand to the cheek on Joyce's bunk) breaths "I love you," into Joyce's mouth and... The final panel, Dorothy, upright and on top, begins to believe she really is the Abraham Lincoln of making Joyce cum. Until Joyce... *Stay tuned for your next exciting installment....*

Harold

@ArdieBea, this is great analysis, but I'm not sure how Willis feels about having such a detailed summary of the Slipshine here. (Maybe a better question would be how Slipshine Brad feels about it.)

ArdieBea

Happy for it to be removed if necessary. I've tried to not be too explicit about the action, and focus on structure and meaning. If my word pictures come too close to the actual thing (I really don't think they get anywhere near it) then that would be good to know. For those who haven't yet got the slipshine, I'd like to give some clues as to what they're not seeing, though. And for those who can't get it, a little bit of info about the character dynamics that Willis chose to illustrate.

David M Willis

i'm just happy that for the first time there's a page-by-page analysis, that's never happened before i don't mind textual analysis, so long as we're not just pasting pages in here

Harold

Great! And, I just want to say that I also absolutely love the flashback to that pivotal "Only Exception" moment towards the end.

Harold

I'm just surprised no one's said anything yet about the fact that they both keep their glasses on the entire time.

The Lurker

Well he’s no Brad Guigar, but it’ll do.

Joe Helfrich

Do they still have pubic hair that's the same as the design of their head hair? Because once I saw it, I couldn't unsee it. (Sorry if you hadn't seen it.)