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Evan

Thank you!

Evan

I will say that the more information about the Aether and the entities present within, the more interesting it becomes, and I like how you’re developing the mythological history of your universe and bringing it into the present. I appreciate learning more about the Khontarans and Khorsa’s people, but I’m a bit surprised that the two medical professionals left each other (and themselves) out of the full medical checkups that were given to the rest of the crew. They *should* know better and do better than that. I’m very curious as to what Khorsa’s reaction will be when she finds out about her ‘cure’… not to mention Alex’s reaction! On the other hand, I am looking at Chapter 59 and the story was originally about the Prometheus and is of course named, Project Prometheus, and I’d really like to see it get back to that, too. We had very little content on it, so far, and it hasn’t seemed to be a central focus for the vast majority of the story to date. So, that’s my ‘complaint’ about this very enjoyable story. :-)

C. H. Darkstrider

Worry not. We'll be heading back there soon enough. Then the real adventure begins!

Evan

I’m taking you at your word, so I changed my membership to be an annual one. Looking forward to seeing the return!

C. H. Darkstrider

Remember, I stated in previous chapters that they only need to make one last stop before heading back.

Evan

I understand that that was their plan… and perhaps your own… but as the saying goes, “If you want to make the gods laugh…”

Michael56Smith

.13: well, Mama Korsa is going to have to come clean, and confess her true relationship to the Khontarans' royalty sooner rather than later, ... and the relatively slow trip through Hyper-space is allowing the crew time to get a few things done, ... like getting various preparations made, more Aetheric training accomplished, and some critical decisions decided, ... Gloria and Matthias Renauld will get Korsa's deluxe medical check-up in the Regen Pod, and have all their nerve and bone problems fixed up, ... -- Also, Captain Dagan Min and his 4 cargo ship's crews will get time to do needed things as well, ... I hope Alex and the Darkstrider crew can reach an understanding with Captain Min, to use him, with his 4 cargo ships and their fairly light crews, to scout out some more trustworthy ship's crew personal to fill their own, and some of the Persius's future needs, ... maybe make a few key stops along their way, ... -- and they should make some agreements to have the lovely lady Admiral's (Williams) chosen crews to meet up with the Darkstrider soon, ... maybe bringing a few 'older' model ships with them, that could be refreshed and upgraded, similar to the way the Frigate Darkstrider was, ... that could help Commadore Alex to more rapidly build-up his new Prometheus fleet, that will be necessary to accompany the Persius on its future missions, ... (Oh yeah, a new and improved fleet of top-of-the-line ships: Battleships, Cruisers, Destroyers, and Scouts, Frigates and Corvettes, also with a number of various support vessels too). -- Yeah, lots of fun stuff to happen in the next chapters, ... and for more chapters after that, as this does look to become an epic tale, ... yay! ;-) ttfn

Si

Another great chapter!

Jay Emberhowl

Just enjoyed rereading this from the begining and ending with this new chapter today, enjoyed it immensely has me looking forward to ch60 and hopefully korsa big reveal which has me feeling like a kid at xmas anxious for it to arrive ,as i assume korsa being royalty aswell as being pregnant will affect alex's plans for the alliance

Tom Ray

next chapter please.............................................

Michael56Smith

03/17/24, it's St, Patrick's day and along with the wearing of the green, it is high time for a Project Prometheus chapter 60 - Teaser, .... soon please ... ;-) ttfn

Tom Ray

next chapter please.............................................................. I am only hear for my monthly Project.... I am not interested in the other Stories. NEXT Chapter please.......................................................