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And the next 10-pages batch!

Content warning for violence, child abuse, domestic violence etc, as this is graphic in this (and the next) update.

I tried to simplify my layer composition and also the number of text layers, to make working on the pages easier. In the process I figured out how to do a bit more "organic" way of the colored "thought bubbles" I use, so they look a bit different than before (but barely noticable). The process already got a little bit quicker through that, but I will try to reduce some more steps and details in the next batches.

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Courtney Rose

Obviously there’s a lot going on in this update but I thought Pham was very interesting here. She recognized that Rueben was looking at her for help and seemed like she was ready to act on that but it’s easier said than done when you’re with a parental figure that is abusing their child (I don’t blame her here at all), she pulls away Hayet from the table to get away from their dad as soon as he slaps Rueben the first time and it looks like she’s trying to stand in front of Hayet when Rueben’s vision is blurry, she yells at his dad to stop but his dad yells back at her and calls her a “infiltrating lolita” which is so gross. More on the latter being that could be how Rueben’s dad sees Pham since lolita, in this context, is how an adult views a minor in a sexual nature as something like a tempter/temptress but that’s purely their delusion since children can’t consent to sexual acts with adults nor would it be likely a child comes into a house to seduce an adult. Let alone how he immediately jumps to the conclusion that Rueben brought a girlfriend to their home and could get her pregnant just because he’s going through puberty?? We already know that Rueben’s dad has got issues but geez… I love Pham so much. She was incredibly brave in this update.

Spudnikrx

Question about publication. I purchased your first book and have not seen anything about a book 2 or beyond. Is this something I have missed or something aimed for the future? Highly enjoy having your comic on my shelves to share with friends when visiting

Tom G

What a total jerk 😫

JaySevun

Reading this one hurt more than any of the chapters before. It was damn brutal.

Clyde 🐷

I literally started crying . This hit home a bit