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“They look a little different.” Was the first thing Tom said as he looked over the ships. While Ajax had made sure each carpenter understood the design he did leave them a little freedom in the final designs as that would increase the chance of them unlocking a Skill. 

“They each have their uses.” Ajax explained as he looked at them before looking towards Aurexion who didn’t seem impressed with the ships. “Can you keep an eye out and make sure there are no spies nearby?” 

Having the boats leak now wouldn’t be a tragedy but the longer they could delay the reveal the better it would be. The final assembly had also been done outside the workshop since with the size of the ships even the fifty foot ceiling was still too low. 

“This one is going to be faster.” Ajax explained as he pointed towards the smallest of the ships. 

“So this one is the strongest?” Jake asked as he looked towards the biggest of them. 

“No, that one is for transporting goods.” Ajax corrected. 

“But it’s so much bigger.” Jari said. 

“But it’s not reinforced.” Ajax pointed out. “It’s made to be solid but light enough that you can add a lot of cargo to it. The next biggest one can hold a lot less before it starts to sink because its frame is much heavier and that accounts for the extra weight.” 

“If it’s meant to be sturdier why does it have so many holes in the sides so close to the water?” Lexi asked, she had looked over the designs and understood the concept but the gaps were a little odd.

“For paddles.” Ajax answered. “The main way to travel will likely be sailing, a Wind mage could make that a lot easier but since that one is more of a combat design it has a way to move that isn’t dependent on the wind.” 

Finally after taking a good look at the ships the family all approached the carpenters that were waiting off the one side. They were nervous, this was months of work and while all of them were qualified and gifted carpenters all of them were also on the younger side, Ajax knew there was no point in trying to get such an Achievement for someone who only had a decade or two to live. 

“They are great.” Ajax praised them. “Now that you have some experience and know the designs better I would like you to focus on making more of the general model there.  Ideally another eight or so would be great.” 

“Another… Eight.” The carpenter slowly swallowed the knot in his throat. “My lord, those four took us more than two months to build. I doubt we can finish another eight in half the time.” 

“You’ll have more helpers this time.” Ajax assured them, Tom had recruited more carpenters, or more accurately he had finished doing proper checks on the ones they had access to before to choose some that were trustworthy and loyal.

“Are they more experienced?” Another carpenter asked, worried that Ajax wasn’t happy with their result and bringing in someone more experienced. “If there are any issues we’d be happy to make adjustments.” 

“Some of them might be older and have higher Skills than you.” Ajax didn’t try to hide it and he could see the dejection on their faces once they heard the words. “But the four of you would be in charge, I can assure you that you have more experience in this than any of them do.” A completely true statement seeing as they were the only ones to have built ships. 

The delivery of the news like this had been his mother’s suggestion, the small moment of fear before the good news would make them appreciate it more and build deeper ties to House Hearthbound. Ajax would have liked not to have to play those games but with them being the first builders of ships until someone got a shipwright Skill they would be the first ones others would try to bribe away. 

“Shall we try them out?” Ajax asked. 

“Can we control something that large?” Tom asked knowing almost nothing about actually moving in a desired direction in a boat or ship. 

“Is it safe?” Kate asked at the same time.

“I can explain the theory behind controlling the movement.” Ajax answered. “But even if we can’t figure it out or if something breaks Lexi and I are both powerful enough to get us back to shore by using magic on the water itself. As for it being safe I doubt there will be any danger with me here and Aurexion patrolling the skies.” 

Ajax was pretty sure there was nothing in the water and they wouldn’t be going all that far from the shore the first time so even if there were monsters in the lake none of them had been close enough to react to Aurexion a couple weeks ago so there shouldn’t be an issue with that. 

“We’ll go with the smallest one, it should be the easiest one to handle.” Ajax said as the whole family moved towards the small boats docked on the shore that would take them to the bigger boats in the water.

The first thing that Ajax noticed once he was on deck was that there was no helm on it as he remembered from his time on Earth. He had explained the idea behind a rudder and how ropes were supposed to help guide it because he hadn’t described the wheel, an oversight he hadn’t even realized until he was on deck and was looking at two levers. 

In theory there was nothing wrong with the design, it should have worked just as well, with people in this world being a lot stronger there wasn’t the need for that much leverage which was a big selling point for the captain's wheel he remembered. These controls looked more like ones for a riding lawn mower. Something for him to approach the carpenters about before they started making more ships. 

“You want to give it a go first?” Ajax asked Jake as he nudged him towards the levers, only slightly worried that his nephew wouldn’t be able to physically handle them with his low Stats.

“Are you sure he should be the one to try it out?” Tom asked after Jake shot towards the levers with Kate following a step behind him.

“The sail isn’t pulled so we won’t be moving anywhere just yet.” Ajax reassured his brother. “It’s all just a bit of fun.” 

After explaining that Ajax took off most of his clothes before diving in the water to inspect the rudder’s movements as Jake played with the levers and to ensure there weren’t any obvious issues that had been missed once the ship was in the water. 

“Uncle Ajax, you're all wet.” Jake helpfully pointed out after Ajax swam with enough power to launch himself from the water all the way to the deck.

“I think we’re ready to give this a go.” Ajax said as he, his father and Alana started pulling ropes to raise the sail.

Thankfully while there was wind it wasn’t too strong so when the sail was pulled tight the ship only started to move slowly and the waves weren’t all that strong.

“Elara is going to be so excited when she sees this.” Lexi said, looking at the sail. With her Storm domain Elara was going to be so much more invested in the sail and using the wind for speed. 

“We’ll also need something so people can tell where they are.” Elija said.

“We know where we are.” Sam said.

“Yes, now that we can see the shore.” Elija agreed. “What about when all you can see all around you is water on a cloudy night. How will people know they are still heading in the right direction.” 

It was a good point. Ajax knew there was no compass and ways to navigate hadn’t been needed before, he was sure there were Skills for that but relying on a person having the right Skill to know where to go wasn’t a good long term solution.

“We’re moving.” Jake exclaimed from the edge of the deck, having abandoned the levers to look overboard.

Lexi had taken over the levers as she looked at the sail before casting a spell and changing the wild, watching how it caught the sail at a different angle yet the boat continued to move forward until she pulled one of the levers which cause the boat to not only advance but also begin to turn.

“We’re also swaying…” Jari said as he looked unsteady on his feet, his tail moving behind him erratically in an effort to help with his balance but it looked to be hurting more than helping. “I’m not feeling too well.” 

Ajax looked towards Jari with pity as he seemed the most affected by the sea sickness, while he was the first Ajax was expecting him not to be the only one of them to feel it before they were done experiencing their first sail. 

Comments

Ray

First TFTC!

Jordan Adams

Don't need taller ceilings if you just put it altogether outside 🤣

userunfriendly

TFTC! 🪓🔨🐲🐉 Having the boats leak now wouldn’t be a tragedy but the longer they could delay the reveal the better it would be. Why? It’s not like Hearthbound can actually hide large sail ships…🤔🤔 “But it’s so much bigger.” Jari said. “But it’s not reinforced.” Ajax pointed out. “It’s made to be solid but light enough that you can add a lot of cargo to it. Extra large Spring Roll for monsters. 😱😱 “The main way to travel will likely be sailing, a Wind mage could make that a lot easier but since that one is more of a combat design it has a way to move that isn’t dependent on the wind.” Spanish Galley design, perfectly suited for the Mediterranean, which really is basically a giant lake. 🤔🤔 “My lord, those four took us more than two months to build. I doubt we can finish another eight in half the time.” But you know how to build them now. 🤔🤔 “But the four of you would be in charge, I can assure you that you have more experience in this than any of them do.” A completely true statement seeing as they were the only ones to have built ships. Probably not since the time of the Reaper, when the entirety of the humanoid lands was one kingdom, have ships been seen on this lake. I’ve long suspected the Reaper was an Isekai reincarnation as well. 😳😳 Ajax would have liked not to have to play those games but with them being the first builders of ships until someone got a shipwright Skill they would be the first ones others would try to bribe away. Stick and carrot, Ajax. Stick and carrot. 🥕🥕 “But even if we can’t figure it out or if something breaks Lexi and I are both powerful enough to get us back to shore by using magic on the water itself. But most mages simply aren’t that powerful…even if it becomes SOP (standard operating procedure) to embed mages into the crew, they’re not going to be of that much help…except when.becalmed, maybe. 🙄🙄 These controls looked more like ones for a riding lawn mower. Something for him to approach the carpenters about before they started making more ships. 😳😳😂🤣😂🤣 “Uncle Ajax, you're all wet.” Jake helpfully pointed out after Ajax swam with enough power to launch himself from the water all the way to the deck. Yep, by now, Ajax really is basically superhuman. 😳😳 It was a good point. Ajax knew there was no compass and ways to navigate hadn’t been needed before, he was sure there were Skills for that but relying on a person having the right Skill to know where to go wasn’t a good long term solution. Would a compass even WORK?! 😳😳 while he was the first Ajax was expecting him not to be the only one of them to feel it before they were done experiencing their first sail. I hate seasickness. 🤢🤮😱 As you may have noticed, me and Corwin have been discussing the feasibility of Hearthbound embarking on this project, which has a significant risk attached, as well as requiring massive capital investment, and won’t show returns for decades. Corwin and I both agree that at this time, it’s just plain stupid for Ajax to embark on a project with so many risks, and so little return. Then I had an idea. A wild brainstorm, and to me, plausible enough to be a prediction. What if Ajax is actually inventing Venture Capitalization?! Invite Goldmancer, Manashaper, Steelblade, the Crown and the Imperial family to invest?! This dilutes the risks, and secures the massive capital required to set up freight services between Gryndor and the Empire, and by selling shares to each investor, in return for share of the profits, Ajax would have introduced Corporations into this World. So these chapters are all about proof of concept…putting together enough to be able to show potential investors. I think this makes sense. 🤔🤔😈😈

Arrogant Savant

Ajax introducing the concept of motion sickness into this world, I actually expect that ships will also be a great source of levelling and receiving balance skills (similar to how his saber designs helped riders back in book 1).

Corwin

Having a crane to set the Mast is telling just saying. Also changing out a lever for a wheel isnt complicated. And is kind of necessary on larger ships, with the ability to use multiple people to crank the wheel to steer. Smaller ships you can get a lever system to work on. But lever systems are terrible without machines powering them. Though I am kind of confused why there isnt a helm...its usually on top of the Captains cabin, and affords a better sight line when steering the ship.m Also ship sails usually go down not up. Modern designs do that, old school ships don't. Mainly because you need a lot of modern equipment to perform raising and lowering the sails on the deck vs going up the rigging. Stats might make that possible to physically do it but not really capable of making it not screwed. And if you don't know what you are doing, Sam and Alanna wouldn't be able to do it themselves. Trust me having sailed with people who didn't know how to and having a crew watching who did, we easily trippled the job of what experienced sailors could do by themselves. Sad but true. Yeah compasses can possibly be made if you want to do Magnetic Needles surrounded by water and capsulated and enclosed. It would work for several weeks at best. But yeah you will need to make the circle and divide by 360 and figure out navigating from there. My suggestion would be to do those tests on land and make a navigating course for a few weeks before testing on water. But you will also want to test that in the air as well.

Corwin

Only if you are making a ship in greater length than 90 feet long and by 23 feet on the beam. A 50 foot Mast would work on that ship. Larger ones would demand a much higher ceiling

Kurby

I wonder if anyone will gain the Unsteady Balance skill from this. At least I think that's what its called. Ajax got it in like book 2 or 3.

tyler sexton

I'm surprised they didn't create a sort of sun dial. That would at least give them an east/west direction on a clear or partially clear day. I wonder if something akin to dolphins exist and will swim next to the ship.

Corwin

Also why did Ajax make a Galley, admittedly that would unlock an achievement possibly. But for overall usefulness its not the best. You cut down on weight for cargo and eliminating cargo space as well as maximizing food consumption. Since you would need 2 to 3 people per oar. It also will take awhile to coordinate rowers and work on conditioning them, since you have various speeds you would need to get the rowers to know. At best it makes for a great messenger or envoy ship, since you would be able to make go faster than just sails, or rowing can accomplish

Some Guy

Thanks for the chapter

Corwin

Because you can build a ship a number of different ways. And unfortunately the way they are designed now will require revamping as well. The levers arent workable for large craft without machinery. In theory you can use a lever, but when they are fully loaded and the weather is bad you can't double, triple or quadruple up on steering with a lever system. Actually not. A galley requires more people, a paddle requires 2 to 3 people to use, stats might help off set that, but thats a big oar and rowing for long periods of time is going to burn through stamina like its nothing. Plus more crew means more eating. Meaning less cargo. 😂😂😂 it doesn't matter. Wood requires seasoning. You can't make a good ship without seasoning the timber. Which is the first bottleneck. Second is size. Bigger ships require more material, and thicker material. Remember these arent metal ships, these are wood. Some frigates and double deckers ships are made from boards 24 inches thick. Then you have the Masts, you need a trunk thats long and straight, and while we haven't found out how tall these trees are, and we need them everywhere between 50 to 150 feet thick. Plus we need replacements on the ship themselves in case they need to make repairs while on route. So lots of wood. And we need said wood to be on the ship and new ships. It wont be. You forget that small ships like a gig, longboat and other small craft will be on the ship in case it goes under. All you do is run rope out of them to the smaller vessels tie on and row them back to shore. Or they could throw out the anchor if the water is shallow enough and winch them back to shore. None of that would be fun but its possible. I talked about compasses working. And how to do it on my comment. But just a refresher. You magnetize a needle, surround it with water and enclose it. Making the enclosure a circle because its way too easy to make this project simple. Divide the circle into 360 degrees. And there is your compass. A compass made this way will last somewhere between hours to weeks. So lots of playing. Specifically around land to make sure it works and the length of time it works. After that we try water and air.

userunfriendly

“You magnetize a needle, surround it with water and enclose it. Making the enclosure a circle because its way too easy to make this project simple. Divide the circle into 360 degrees.” Yes, but we don’t even know if a static magnetic field runs through this world. Or more likely, mana drowns it out. 😳😳 I’m assuming that this planet has a magnetic field…to maintain habitable life, you need to deflect solar wind…unless mana does that…😳😳🤔🤔 Luckily, Ajax now owns the dungeon where the first floor iterations, has a one in 8 chance of producing nice, mana rich wood. 😈😈 Still needs to be seasoned…🙄🙄 Yep, steering levers is dumb. Agreed. ⛵️⛵️ Galleys are dumb. But without steam engines, the only way to move when becalmed. ⛵️⛵️

Bunny

Tftc. Now time to see if he will make trailblazing rain or not.

Corwin

Actually if there is rotation from the planet, and magnetic mana, there is gravity and gravity has the byproduct of magnets. And ho we are not going deep into that because yes science disagrees but its the simplest thing. We would have to play with mana rich wood to determine usage. But yeah seasoning will be needed. As well as figuring out the length of the trees. Masts and keels would be best to play with first. But this is still a metric ton of wood needed, and needed to be transported to Nassau(port). Reread what I said. There are other ways, like using the gig and Longboat to row the ship, as well as using the anchor. Galleys are not the way to do it.

Sam F

all that time prepping for ships and he forgot the steering wheel? you're joking...

Corwin

To be fair small craft can use levers. Bigger craft not so much. But he also forgot the quarterdeck was too

userunfriendly

Yeah, if the planet’s core is molten iron and rotating. 😳😳 Again, stuff needs to be experimented with. 🙄🙄⛵️⛵️ I completely agree. Galleys are not effective or efficient. But Ajax knows squat about ships, so he went with what he saw on tv. 😂🤣

Corwin

Not necessarily molten iron, any molten magnetic metal works. Eh they can always make the trip around the Lake and close to the shore. Its the method to go with before having a compass in working order. The benefit would be 2 miles off shore allows for visual confirmation. Sounding off the Lake, and allowing for more coordination in building other ports. And keeping travel time reasonably faster than by road, if not as fast as a straight course.

userunfriendly

Certainly that’s what early voyages in the Mediterranean did. That’s why Greek galleys were designed to be hauled up a shore, to be beached for the night. 🚣‍♀️

Gigition

As you said it probably to prioritize trailblazer skills, but also he can use it as a training ship. Training people on it and then transferring them to a different ship. Depending on where the holes are he might be able to put canons in them in the future.

Corwin

Most likely they will just anchor vs hauling the ships on and off the shore. It's better long term if they dont

userunfriendly

Agreed, unless Ajax goes for chinker built longships…in preparation for conducting Viking style raids on installations near the shores. 😈😈 Viking longboats were also designed to be beached regularly. 😈😈

Corwin

You can only do that if the Empire really isnt becoming part of Gryndor. Plus Vikings had oar slots. Making your idea of trading terrible in the fact it can't carry that much. In addition someone would have to take the Viking ship down the River and see where it goes, which should be somewhere past the Fortress Tree.

Corwin

Unlikely slots for cannons. Alchemy explosives would definitely allow for a cannon set up. But oar slots are much smaller than cannons, unless we went with 3 pounders. A 3 pound cannon wont do much against installations and ships. Its the weakest type of cannon, unless you want to put in pellets to fire like grape shot. But smooth bore cannons have an accuracy measured in feet. Lobbying them up in the air and letting them come down wont give you accuracy but it will definitely make a person duck and hide

userunfriendly

I thought this Lake didn’t have a river? 🤔🤔 This whole ship building arc…we’re all waiting for something to happen…🙄🙄

Corwin

About 79% of Lakes have a river connecting to them to the ocean or another body of water. A large body of water that only had water with no connection is possible. But thats basically a 1 in 5 chance. Plus you have the issue of a water mage in that scenario being very capable of maneuvering the water elsewhere. Which anyone with access to Mana would do if they wanted to control irrigation for their fields. But the Fortress Tree is surrounded on an island in a different Lake, with a river that flows elsewhere. Since that river is where the old Baron was siphoning off mana infused water. But I don't see how the two lakes being connected by a river would be a reason why something can't happen. There are multiple lakes connected by multiple river systems. The Great Lakes in the North America connect over 5,000 rivers to those 5 Lakes. And those Lakes have various Islands in them as well. Admittedly if there are islands in the middle of the Lake that might have other issues

userunfriendly

I distinctly recall that the mana infused water came out of an artesian spring. 🤔🤔 I don’t recall any rivers coming out of the Lake in the map…🤔🤔

Corwin

"One thing that did stick out to me was that the water running in the river was a lot less potent than it had been in the pond." Page 399 in the first book It also called where the Fortress Tree now a pond. But pond is not really a designation. Since there really isnt a size that makes using the word pond impractical so pond or lake can be interchangeable