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A/N : Sorry for the delay in posting! I was playing Wow forever after I hit post but it aparently didn't go through.



From the next day the training began. While all of House Hearthbound had been there to take the ship out for the first time most of them weren’t there the second day. The trip to their new city alone took a day and a half with a carriage even after the roads were built so without Aurexion to help speed up travel most of them wouldn’t be there to practice since they had other things to do.

Lexi was an exception to this. She thought she had a good chance of getting a trailblazer Skill with her Wind magic and conducting a ship so along with a host of retainers she had remained there ready to take the ship out again the second day. 

“Ready at your command, milady.” Despite the slang form of address for my lady, Theron had adapted over the years to being House Hearthbound’s retainer and his talent has only shone brighter with proper training and decent resources.

Theron had taken it upon himself to control the levers that directed the ship, a few wave hits at the wrong moment the day before had given Ajax a good reason to bring back to the carpenters for changing the levers out with a wheel. The amount of force water could put on the rudder was enough the throw a normal person across the deck. Ajax of course had no issue keeping a strong grip on it but of their young retainers Theron was one of the few Ajax was sure was up to the task. 

“We’ll start slower.” Lexi reassured the rest of the retainers on board. “We need to see if there are any among you that need time to adapt to being on a ship.” 

After a few hours on a ship the day before Jari hadn’t been the only one to get sea sick, he was still the worst of them by a fair margin but that Elija and Judy hadn’t been far from throwing up over the railing besides the monkey beastkin. 

While five people started to adjust the sail as Lexi began to cast for a slow controlled and maintained breeze five more retainers were doing drills down below. Heavy thread bags on their shoulders as they moved from one spot to the next. 

“Keep up the movement.” Their leader said. “According to the duke we need to be able to react to anything putting a whole in the ship, the stuff you’re carrying in those sacks should be able to make a makeshift patch that will last for a couple days.” 

One thing Ajax had taken from Earth’s knowledge of ships was that ‘unsinkable’ wasn’t really a thing, one ship that had been called that had sunk on its maiden voyage despite being one of the biggest ships ever made at the time. And that was all without accounting for Mana or the monsters that could be hiding in the depths. A way to seal a whole in the ship was essential, but a method was useless without people trained in using it, once too much water got in the ship would slowly start to sink regardless so speed was of the essence.

The ship finally starting moving and that caused a bigger sway in the ship tripping up one of the retainers. “Watch yourself.” The leader called out, all the while grabbing a beam to steady himself as he had also been caught by surprise with the sudden movement. “These ships will be carrying fragile merchandise, or worse alchemical explosives for combat. Tripping and landing on such things could cost a lot or kill you outright.” 

“Adjust the sail.” Lexi called out to the crew. “I’ll keep the wind consistent, we should be able to increase or decrease the speed by adjusting the angle of the sail.” 

The crew was in motion once more eager to learn, all of them knew the idea for all of this had to have come from the duke and the chance of following in his footsteps even a little appealed to all of them. 

“Quick reactions are going to be a problem.” Theron said as he could feel how slow the increase and decrease the speed of the ship was. As a physical fighter, especially one of his size with a strength stat to match, knew all about proper form and balance to allow for quick reactive movements. The problem was that boats had no way to exert enough force to force a quick change in movement. “A good strategist will prove more valuable for a naval battle than one on land.” 

“Start turning.” Lexi said while she agreed with the bull beastkin’s opinion. “We don’t want to get too far from the shore.” 

“We’re turning!” Theron called out, noticeably however he didn’t call out which direction they were turning and just pulled the levers for a right turn. 

Lexi maintained the wind constant that meant that as the ship started to turn the wind wasn’t coming from behind anymore and adjustments to the sail needed to be made. The crew however was obviously new and this was where the first big mistake happened. One of the retainers hadn’t been paying attention and one of the log coming up behind him until it knocked him overboard and into the water.

With a man in the water the chaos started and the youth of the crew finally started to really show. These were promising retainers for House Hearthbound and their talent and effort in training meant that even when tackling something as new as sailing they were disciplined. Their lack of experience started to show once something went wrong. 

“I’ve got the rope.”

“Should we lower the small boat?” 

“Trim the sail so we don’t go past him.” 

Everything fell apart until Lexi’s voice cut straight through. “Keep to your jobs.” The wind spell she had been maintaining was released and a large hand of water formed in the sea raising the fallen crew member and placing him on the deck soaked all the way through and forming a puddle. “Maintain speed and adjust to the change in wind.” 

With the orders given she finally left Theron’s side and approached the man still dripping water on the deck. “I’m sorry my lady.” The man was more embarrassed than anything else though a small headache was coming on as a small bump grew a little larger on the back of his head where he was hit. With his physical stats the cold water and the hit weren’t dangerous so the experience was more embarrassing than anything else.

“It’s fine.” Lexi reassured him. “This is our first time doing this mistakes are bound to happen, all I ask is that we learn from them. Now I do believe that you have a danger Skill, did that trigger?” 

The Skill in question didn’t work on traps but it did work on people, what she wanted to know was if it would be triggered by a mistake. It was hard to manufacture such a situation organically so now that it had happened since another crew member’s actions had sent the beam moving towards him she wanted to know if his Skill alerted him or not.

“It didn’t, my lady.” He shook his head.

“Alright.” While that made the Skill less powerful in terms of defence it did mean the Skill was intent based so a mistake wouldn’t trigger it but it would make betrayal easier to sense. “Go get yourself healed, dry yourself off and change your clothes then get back to it.” 

With that Lexi returned to her spot next to Theron excited about sailing some more. The teamwork required, the long term thinking as well as the influence of spells. While on a ship the dynamics between mages and physical combatants were flipped, mages were the flexible ones while physical builds took more time to make changes to speed or direction. This would be an exciting and hopefully rewarding way to train for her. 

With a silent apology to the rest of the family Lexi knew she would be spending the next month and a half out here sailing in preparation for the mock battle. She hoped that Ajax was having just as much success with his own training as well. 

While Lexi was sailing Ajax and Duke Manashaper were both pushing their [Sense Mana] Skill as Ajax swung Aurexion’s latest trophy in an effort to get a feel for the Space Mana. Both of them had felt Space Mana before when used by Anna’s bond but the little furball didn’t have the pool for more than a flash of Space Mana at a time. They now had access to large displays of Space Mana, something Ajax hoped could help him unlock his third Legendary Mana type. 

Comments

userunfriendly

TFTC! 🐉🐲🪓🔨 Sorry for the delay in posting! I was playing Wow forever after I hit post but it aparently didn't go through. No worries, we’re all gamers, and familiar with getting just a few more minutes of playing in… 🕹️🕹️😂🤣 The trip to their new city alone took a day and a half with a carriage even after the roads were built The scale of this world is something else…😳😳 Theron had adapted over the years to being House Hearthbound’s retainer and his talent has only shone brighter with proper training and decent resources. Nobles: SO UNFAIR! Ajax Hearthbound swooped in before we could grab…I mean recruit him! 😡😡 “We need to see if there are any among you that need time to adapt to being on a ship.” “Sea Legs” should certainly be a fairly easy to get skill. 🤔🤔 “According to the duke we need to be able to react to anything putting a whole in the ship, the stuff you’re carrying in those sacks should be able to make a makeshift patch “According to the duke we need to be able to react to anything putting a HOLE in the ship, the stuff you’re carrying in those sacks should be able to make a makeshift patch 😂🤣😂🤣 What’s in those bags? Some thing like…a lightweight, buoyant concrete that sets quickly? Some alchemical concoction Ajax came up with? 🤔🤔 A way to seal a whole in the ship was essential, but a method was useless without people trained in using it, A way to seal a HOLE in the ship was essential, but a method was useless without people trained in using it, 😂🤣😂🤣 or worse alchemical explosives for combat. Tripping and landing on such things could cost a lot or kill you outright.” Oh Ajax!!! You naughty, naughty boy!!! I’ve been wondering how you’d take care of monsters living at the bottom of a lake…Depth Charges!!! 😂🤣😂🤣 Fish have something called a Swim Bladder that’s sensitive to underwater concussions…that’s why a simple stick of dynamite is the best fishing tool. 🧨🧨 So if there are monsters at the bottom of the lake, tossing a few hundred pounds of alchemical explosives poured into a sealed steel drum will kill or stun them. If they use sonar, the better…it will deafen and disorient them. 😈😈 The problem was that boats had no way to exert enough force to force a quick change in movement. “A good strategist will prove more valuable for a naval battle than one on land.” Could Theron have the instincts necessary for ship to ship combat?! ⛵️⛵️😳😳 One of the retainers hadn’t been paying attention and one of the log coming up behind him until it knocked him overboard and into the water. One of the retainers hadn’t been paying attention and one of the BOOMS coming up behind him until it knocked him overboard and into the water. ⛵️⛵️ With his physical stats the cold water and the hit weren’t dangerous so the experience was more embarrassing than anything else. Superhuman crew. 😳😳 While that made the Skill less powerful in terms of defence it did mean the Skill was intent based so a mistake wouldn’t trigger it but it would make betrayal easier to sense. Which versions of the skills does Ajax have? Almost certainly intent…as Judy was sneaking up to him with Malice Aforethought…and that Spider Matron wanted to eat him. 😱😱 She hoped that Ajax was having just as much success with his own training as well. Ajax! Tell her EA is a Mythic skill! 🙄🙄😡😡 They now had access to large displays of Space Mana, something Ajax hoped could help him unlock his third Legendary Mana type. Gryndor diplomat: Here you go, your Majesty. 😈😈 Beastkin King: My hammer! Why…OH SH1T!!! 😱😱 Gryndor Diplomat: Yes, you Majesty, both Ajax Hearthbound and Aurexion have Space Mana. In fact, so does Lexi Manashaper, Anna Goldmancer and a few others. I’ve been asked to convey their thanks. 😈😈 I keep forgetting to mention this…during a reread, in one of the books, it’s mentioned that the System includes a clock. So now we know how everyone keeps track. 🙄🙄🕰️🕰️

Sam F

short 😢

Bunny

Tftc indeed just got me before break time at work so that's nice.

Kurby

So many skills, so little time to gain them.

Arrogant Savant

We haven't gotten the Trailblazer skill confirmation but I have little doubt that such a unique usage of wind mana and physical abilities is already making headway.

Arrogant Savant

Ajax isn't especially greedy for them which dampens my enthusiasm slightly.

Feibel Sebastian

Tftc. You wrote whole where it should be hole a few times.

userunfriendly

But Space affinity with Dragon Breath… 😈😈🐲🐉🔥🔥

Babtain

Whole ---> hole.

Joken

So Lexi gets the captain skill and Theron the Helmsman?

Jordan Adams

Dude, the 15 minute late mark hit and I already knew what was going. My exact thought was "98% chance its WoWF, 2% chance hit by truck its probably fine."

Corwin

So a 60 mile stretch isnt that crazy. Or at least I think it is. That's assuming 5 miles per hour for a carriage ride. Stats only go up so far for animals if you arent leveling them. The real question is why they are on deck? A ship has more of it under the waterline than above it. Also why are they not trained before hand? Since they could be trained in how to use that material long before they set foot on the ship. And why would you carry sacks? Depending on how you use it, sacks is a terrible way to store it in a ship...plus the ship should have bilge pumps, all ships take on water, its why they have pumps and have people manning them to pump it out. Who said they have depth charges? Depth charges is the best way to kill you and your target...a wooden ship can't move far enough away to miss that blast. So using them kills your crew and your target... Theron would need a lot of work to make him a tactics and strategist for naval warfare. He might understand a part of it. But all of his early stats and development is for fighting. Switching his build would be costly for Hearthbound and himself. His Strength stat made him barely able to use the levers. This is where we need to start seeing Ajax actually writing out the SOPs for ships. What to do if someone falls overboard, how to address people and giving them a specific job to do while on board. They can always switch jobs. But again this requires lots of details. And Lexi was in the wrong to save the guy in the way she did. Yes it was simple for her. But it breeds bad habits in how it will go for everyone if she does that. The man was in no danger of dying. But whose to say what happens next time. Again bad Ajax. Work on getting ships and your people set up for naval engagements. Unlocking Space mana helps you and not your House. Your house is in terrible shape. Fix that first. Then work on everything else. Space Mana doesn't help anyone but you. And since you have knowledge on ships you are screwing them over and over again on this. Which is why you had to send the carpenters back to make a wheel and get rid of the levers

Corwin

Unless they know the depth of the water, being too close to land is a good way to beach your ship, and moving at speed will cause a lot of issues that will need to be fixed before they shove off the beach. Lexi should have someone casting a line to check depth, and calling it out of they are traveling. The depth they need on a sloop is between 4 to 8 feet deep. Sitting higher when they aren't fully laden with supplies, cargo and people.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. whole => hole

Doug

PvP, or Normal? My guild sadly is doing normal alliance. I will be making an Orc Rogue and Troll Warrior

userunfriendly

Yeah…there’s got to be a way to make carriages faster…enchanted harnesses? 🤔🤔 Keleros didn’t mention bilge pumps! 😳😳 Seriously?! 🙄🙄 Depth Charges with a long enough delay would be fine, giving even sailing ships tine enough to get away from the bubble. I’m aware, like you are, that the massive bubble produced by the explosion would break the back of any ship underneath them. But unless the lake monsters are Awakened, they’re going to ignore the drums of explosives. Besides, if the depth is deep enough, no bubble rising to the surface. Those waterspouts seen in ww2 movies are near the surface. Enough depth, and the bubble of rising gas actually dissipates. 😈😈. Also available are hedgehogs. Contact fused small hydrodynamic projectiles that rapidly sink, and only explode on contact. They’d explode on the lake bottom, and if Ajax has pinpointed the location of the lake monster’s nests, just as effective in large enough numbers. 😈😈 I’m just hoping to see Theron wearing a cocked hat…like Gregory Peck in Captain Hornblower. 😂🤣 Ajax didn’t write the SOP, because he’s an Architect, not a sailor. And yes, in battle they’d sail away. They need cork life jackets…🙄🙄 You’re right, this is indeed actually distressing, Ajax’s inability to see projects through. 🙄🙄 Gah…he’s a terrible leader. 😡🤬

Some Guy

Thanks for the chapter

Corwin

Actually the answer is more obvious. You train and level up draft animals. Leveling them up increases stats. You probably wouldn't go up to level 20, but under that like level 19 would make a superior animal. And would help you recover the cost long term since you would be able to increase the baseline with a more selective and proper breeding design. Yeah depth charges arent going to work really. The depth and distance are the man factors. Launching them for distance isnt a viable strategy if you adjust for speed. You cant make sure you launch it far enough away if a sea monster or Awakened can move even at half of Ajax's speed in water. Even if you could their is less chance of you hitting them since the splash will cause a reaction. But the radius for that explosion is the real factor. A wooden haul will break. Those 300 to 600 pound charges have a 60 to 80 yard radius. And the ship has to be 100 yards further away from that to stay in one piece once the depth charged exploded. Meaning you would need the ship to be 180 yards minimum from the blast to not be sunk out right. Making haul damage a risk unless they went even further away. I think the Math we did last week was Ajax could move at 136 miles per hour when going all out. So at half that speed is 68 mph which is roughly 33 yards per second. Which means you need to switch to a different set of defense which is difficult to do when you cant see if you hit anything with the blast. Honestly explosives in water without radar is more hopeful than a strategy or sound tactics. Yeah you might kill the one who was coming for you but there is more of a chance you set something else after you. And what happens if someone was to hit a Levithan with one of those? Say a level 300...yeah Ajax is dead, Aurexion is dead, and oh look everyone in Hearthbound dies too. And why? Because the moment you hit one of them the Agreement allows them to truncate the offending party. I can see Theron attempting that change. Maybe going for Helmsman, and going through that before Lieutenant and maybe Captain eventually. But thats a complete rebuild and a large sum of cash, potions, and more. Since he would need more Mana, unlocking a ton of mana types and strategic and tactical skills. Actually you wouldn't need to be a sailor to make a fairly obvious set of SOPs. How to respond when someone goes overboard, jobs, chain of command, proper storage of cargo and personal gear, how to report danger, how to weigh anchor and set anchor, common names for different areas of the ship and parts, signals to communicate between ships and land. Notice what isnt in those how to fight or engage the enemy. But the rest requires a little bit of thinking and basic understanding. Actually in battle or not, you sail away. You will launch a Longboat, gig, jolly boat, or other small craft to go after them and pull them on board after you turn around if its in a normal day. You wouldnt do that if you are going into battle, coming out of battle, or fleeing. Throwing a floating device would also be common. Attached to a rope or not. If its attached then you can pull them aboard without spending more time getting everyone set and coming back for them. And it sets a bad example for his family and retainers as well. His family has no idea and neither do his retainers. Being an innovator is one thing. But half ass projects that get people killed is a different matter. Ajax has killed Queen Bees because they were lethal to people. And now his ships are looking like that too. Sure Hearthbound might get a Trailblazer title or two. But as an employee I would be looking at if Hearthbound was willing to let me die, without taking precautions that normal people would, why would I stay long term... He didn't walk anyone through on the explosives. The "Leader" on heavy thread bags was just now informing people about alchemical explosives. Explosives that could kill you outright. Or maybe put a nice big hole in a ship. Like thats a great way to tell people when They are in the middle of water in a ship made of wood. Like hey if you can't swim, if you fall on this it might kill you, but don't worry if someone else does you might have a big hole in the ship and you might drown that way... And Hearthbound cares for the Common man...yeah that doesn't sound right

Corwin

Not sure. My opinion, Captain would require a chain of command and people recognizing and understanding that Lexi is in command of the ship as an officer and not a noble. Its really not clear of how this works since their really isn't a chain of command. Theron is the Helmsman since he has the strength stat to pull it off, but would that actually work since he really isnt told thats his position. And would [Captain] go to Lexi or the Leader who was telling people what might kill them. Since Keleros did mention they had a Leader

userunfriendly

Yeah…this new arc barely makes sense…unless Ajax has something to pull out of his a$$ that makes everything make sense. I’m seeing just the same things you do, buddy…I just felt I had to take the opposing side, to keep the discussion going. 🙄🙄😱😱😳😳😵😵

Corwin

I think Keleros is going to do the Lake Ship Arc without the Dungeon Run. I think he was going to try to do both, but we keep digging into the Ships and how they work. We discussed how levers were not viable and explained. This led to our new development in this chapter. We just made it more unique with our ideas and explaining how they could and should work. So we should be happy and excited we made a whole new arc. It will need some clean up but hey we did make the arc different lol

userunfriendly

We kept the Realism up. 🥹🥹 We did good. (that’s assuming Keleros has been reading our posts…though certainly the steering wheel addition to the chapter is indicative…) Seriously, I really think what’s going to happen is that Ajax will poison(!!! 😳😳) the Lake Monsters, or there won’t be any, and he’s going to introduce a corporation…with elected officers, common and privileged stocks, and introduce elections to this world. (he’s softening the implications by stipulating that only Privileged Stock owners, Ajax’s allies can vote for corporate officers 🙄🙄) We all originally thought that the Republic was a democracy, but as it turned out, it was a show, and actually an hereditary oligarchy. Certainly the stuff we read during the War arc made us COMPLETELY disgusted with how the Republic treated allies!!! 😡😡 Anyway, that’s MY prediction. 🤔🤔

Corwin

I dont know. Poisoning a Lake to kill anything is more dangerous since the poison leaches into everything. And you have issues with everything being affected. To go with a corporation is a major endeavor and seriously is way too convoluted to work. What you are describing is how most corporations are run today. And would take someone with a lot more knowledge than an architect would know or have. He might go with a corporation but I doubt it. More than likely he would go with a Guild, since they are already known. Then put himself in charge, with building an administrative side that would actually run it. But that is probably not happening since he has proven himself to be unable to do those kind of tasks. Honestly I think the Lake will have an Awaken Village with a set of Tame Beasts at the bottom. And a few Islands of Isolated Humans. The humans there are ones who found themselves in a storm on the Lake shore but managed to be kicked out on the Lake and the desperate few who lived. Founded different villages on different islands. The islands are about 3 miles in from the Lake Shore, so they can't see the Main land. The small Islands in the middle of the Lake are where they feel comfortable staying since when they attempt going to the main land side they run into Mana Beasts and other Beasts. The islands in the middle of the Lake are somewhat connected by low shallows, where towards the main land the water drops deeply.

userunfriendly

Possibly not a Corporation…to start. I can see Ajax subtly changing the bylaws of the “Guild” until it begins to reward integrity, to quietly start changing the mindset of the nobility and those in power from exploiting for personal gain, to being honest, because that rewards the “Guild” officers more…😈😈 (I really do think Ajax’s long term goals are to give more control and benefits to the common people…) That’s BRILLIANT!!! That’s a wonderful concept…like the Korean movie Castaway on the Moon, having isolated groups of humans living on a vast lake, simply because they can’t navigate is…an interesting and wonderful concept…those people will have a very different, and very skewed skill set, because they’ve been isolated…they don’t have privacy skills, for example, and the implications and the weird variety of skills they’ve acquired will be really interesting…😳😳

Corwin

Adding corporations wouldn't make much sense still though. Nor would they give control or benefits for the common person. Corporations is a way to structure a number of things, but accountability and giving benefits isnt one of them. Like many businesses they are to make money and spread exposure of losses to a wide base. Its not designed for what you are thinking. Than again most businesses arent. A business is a separate entity that denies someone from taking more than the corporation has control of. So any problems with this corporation would have no legal right to Hearthbound assets. Why would they not have privacy skills? Privacy skills wouldn't necessarily be missed. Skewed skills, yes. Unique skills, yes. But what they lack is how to get from the islands to the main land. Navigation skills might be more unique and common because of the need.

userunfriendly

I was thinking that one of Ajax’s long term goals should be to at least provide an alternative to feudalism in thinking for the commoners. Agreed, while corporations are not really democratic, the idea that a Chief Executive Officer could literally be deposed by a simple majority would be pretty devastating to the local “common sense”. That someone could be replaced for lack of competency should shake up sone “unspoken”, yet deeply held concepts concerning nepotism. 🙄🙄. And once there’s an IPO, where commoners (though obviously wealthy merchants) could buy common stock, that opens up the possibility that someone unscrupulous could come up with the “evil” idea of seizing control by buying up a majority of the common stock. (not knowing that was Ajax’s plan all along…) because the only way democracy will ever replace long entrenched feudalism is if the commoners themselves make the changes. 😈😈 I was exploring a common concept in science fiction about long isolated communities…in this case, a magical version of communism. Each resident would be forced to acquire a skill that enforces obedience to the group. 😳😳😱😱. Hence privacy skills would be verboten.