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Behold! 'Tis the first Author's Choice release of the month!

I fell victim to reading some DC/Marvel fics recently, so I ended up with a fairly strong urge to work on Why Was There No Truck!?. The fact the story left off at a point that things were going to get a bit more interesting didn't hurt :-p. I'm honestly almost completely happy with how this one came out. The only part I'm not entirely pleased with is the Carnage fight, which I don't hate, but I think could have gone better. I found his fighting style and mentality particularly challenging to write, as its kinda amorphous. A style honestly easier to depict visually then to describe -_-.

Anyway! I was quite pleased to finally be in a good spot to start trickling in more interactions with the other vigilantes of Gotham, and I'm fairly excited for reactions to the twist in this one! Though the next update in the month is likely going to be a lot harder, as it should be where Alyssa finally encounters Batman himself. Which...I really need to pin down better exactly how I want him to be in this version. I was feeling particularly uncharitable toward him when I first wrote this fic, and he's still not exactly my favorite DC character, but I think I might want to lighten up on him a little to save myself headaches later...

That's for later, though! For now, you've got an update of the story to read, with a hopefully interesting twist!

As usual, the new stuff is attached here. A quick reminder, I only update master files once both updates of a story are out in a month, so the new bits are only here for now :-). Author's notes will follow in the comments. For now, enjoy the first update of What Was There No Truck?! since May!

P.S. Tried to make another Alyssa image by editing an AI piece featuring Medusa/Rider (who is most closely what Alyssa looks like). The White Tiger image isn't perfect either, since this story's version is Selina Kyle under the costume, but it gives an idea, at least :-).

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Novus's Fanfiction Works

This comment is for author's notes! Beware spoilers! And if you want to comment on one of them, please do so in a separate comment NOT nested here, in order to keep these orderly!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 35: A/N 1: Not entirely happy with how the Carnage thing ended, but the final fight got a little too chaotic for me to write well. I can manage combat decently most of the time these days, but the more chaotic the melee the more trouble I have with it, and this one was a little nuts with Carnage's fighting style vs five heroines.

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 36: A/N 1: This chapter gave me a chance to finally properly get a bit of interaction in with White Tiger and Hawkeye, who've been sort of hovering at the edge of the story, mentioned but barely encountered and never spoken to directly. Another encounter, a bit more of an involved one, with Batgirl was also something I've badly wanted to do, and this gave me a good place to slot that in. A/N 2: It also served to get a bit of interaction with Nico, who hasn't featured enough for being a team member!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Chapter 37: A/N 1: Mwhahahaha! Bet no one saw this one coming. I did mention that SOMEONE broke Mad Hatter out this time, rather than him getting out on his own. Meaning there was a greater plot at foot that, for once, Batman didn't catch onto. Even if he might have been suspicious that he never pinned down who broke him out. A/N 2: Ah, poor Batgirl. Being in the position of having to explain to Batman, of all people, that he done goofed. Though Iess than she thinks he did...

White Neko Knight

Hum. Given that Gothem is literally cursed you could give Batman a back story where multiple out of city teems came in only to make things worse or get decimated. It seems like magic users didn't want to come to this city because of said curse. Batman might just be fed up with people bumbling about and getting in the way. He's always been the "hope for the best, plan for the apocalypse" sort.

novakose

For the record, Wooooooo!!

Novus's Fanfiction Works

That's essentially how I'm already handling him. I meant more what personality I give him and how confrontational he is when they actually interact with him in person. Not his motivations.

Daemonioros

Fun buildup for the meeting with Batman and the very messy situation afterwards. Of all the crime bosses to mind control the others why does it have to be the serial killer.

twilightwanderer

Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to the next one, and seeing Bruce's reaction and interaction with the team. More Nico was also great to see, and I like the setup of this next case. Lastly, I might have missed this earlier, but with this Hawkeye now confirmed to be Artemis, are there multiple Hawkeyes, is Kate Bishop using a different alias, or is she just not a vigilante yet?

White Neko Knight

Ohhhhhh that's fair. Hum. Well he certainly won't be the stoic almost prankster like batman from some of the Animated version. Maybe the Driven hard-core but still caring batman from the video games?

Novus's Fanfiction Works

Kate wasn't traines by Hawkeye in this Amalgam. So, assuming she's even a hero, she's using another name.

Silvereagle21

First, definitely enjoyed the chapters and how things are turning out so far. Second, I am not a Batman fan, so if you want to portray him as a paranoid, obsessive, self-righteous hypocritical control freak I would totally think it is a reasonable and fair and apt description.

BobyCola

thanks for the chapter!

Widget

I think the version of Batman from the fanfic Gotham Goon Gacha would slot in extremely well here (not just cause that's my favorite Batman) - Paranoid, chronically overworked, but fundamentally trying to do right by the city. Easy to cause friction but won't become a member of Alyssa's Rogues Gallery like what happens in a lot of DC isekai fanfictions.

Aeden Emrys

Thanks for the interesting story so far! I look forward to reading much more of this interesting story!