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This is not a teaser - 10 September 2023 (Patreon)

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2023-09-10 08:19:04
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2026-06
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This will be the last of the not-teasers, for the record. The next post which will be updated will totally not be the complete chapter.

Just saying.

It shouldn't be too long in coming, because I have totally not sent it to the betas.

Just saying.

Anyway, here comes the first 29,000 words or so of 12-4.

The final version is 44,000 words, so you will get a good chunk of the update...but not the most evil cliffhangers and revelations. Yes, I know, this is evil. Bwhahaha!

Enjoy your read, dear patrons...

Comments

Christian Biondo

Great update, I completely forgot about the squats selling weapons to our favourite mekboy.

Silver Wolf

Fantastic update and by the Emperor’s grace it dropped on my birthday too thanks

Mike Schaefer

Cliffhangering the cliffhangers is a tactic worthy of the Inquisition…

s22132

Thanks for the update. Taylor and her allies are going to be very busy, I can tell, and you haven't even hit us with the biggest revelations yet. Oh boy...

Gabriel Meadow

Telling Leman Russ 'no' never gets old.

Stormstar1995

I liked the part of the update on the problems the Space Wolves are having getting new ships. I wonder if the Quaryran shipyard is aware of these problems as that be a big boon for the shipyard if it gained at least some of the Space Wolves and their successor business. In addition it would be a good call back

Hunter

: ( cliff hanger. I eagerly await Weavers conversation with Hasing'la in the last part posted soon : ). I expect Hasing'la will find it hilarious and should be quite interesting narratively. I have always found the C'Tan interesting so always fun seeing them included.

Forgottenone

I agree Papa Smurf that the three sub catagories sound like a great idea, that said how will put it into practice. Cause I put a minimum of 2500 for a functional Comitatenses which is projecting a thousand space marines onto the battle field with supporting elements -hundered pilots and two hundered broading/counter broading for the spaceships- plus the specialist and have enough for the chapter to exist the aftermath of a failed campain. Which is far to small for the Limitanei guarding a whole sector. A major problem that I see with this key locations that will be targets of IoM enemies cannot be stopped by a single chapter or two responding. Even the homeworlds of the legions are not immune to this problem, Fenris is more like the best case and Macragge would be worst case if Weaver didn't show up. Unless they increase all the new number for all the chapters towards the ten thousand, which I suspect would cause the High Lords to act unfavorably. This is still a problem brought on by breaking the Legions as a chapter cannot really force any other IoM faction to go along with their plan and coordinating just with other chapters is going to be hard if not planned before hand.

Nicholas

Thanks! I had overestimated Admiral Lawson. I thought as the former commander of the Jupiter yards she had a good sized shipyard worth of people and equipment that she personally owned. Looks like instead her family cut her loose and it is just her. She is taking a huge step down in working for Archmagos Sultan. She must really want her revenge.

mastergamer98007

Hope we get to see something from Lucan Lepidus. Will be interesting to see wearer's reaction to the proto-cult of redemption if my guess is correct. Also with wearer's words for the rouge traders, it will also be very interesting to see the reactions of the radical inquisition that follow the more heretical line of thinking.